2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch
-All of the comments I received on the first elevator pitch were very positive and complementing. I wanted to focus on addressing the audience more directly in this video. I did this by setting up my camera for a better angle when I recorded this elevator pitch. I also wanted to bring more attention to the product's development and its ingredients. However, it is hard for people to understand exactly what I am talking about due to the uniqueness of these various ingredients.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
-The main suggestions I received on my pitch were from Lamar and Adriana. They both suggested setting my camera at a better angle when recording my pitch. Also, Lamar stated that I should add some evidence to back the pitch in order to give credibility to the products produced by Anam Beauty and Wellness, so I did my best to incorporate more detailed descriptions of the products in this pitch.
Hi David! I enjoyed watching your last elevator pitch. You were direct and detailed in explaining the main features of your product. I thought you did a good job incorporating the feedback you received into your pitch. I had a similar experience when completing my pitch because I also received positive feedback on my previous pitches. But, I thought it was interesting how you set certain objectives you wanted to achieve for your pitch. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteHey David,
ReplyDeleteIn this pitch you clearly are directed towards the audience and you gesticulate a lot. This is engaging and helps the viewer want to listen to you more. From reading your post, I can tell that you incorporated Adriana and Lamar's feedback into your pitch. Memorizing your pitch is all I see on the "to-do" for you. Great job!
Hey David,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your elevator pitch!! From the beginning, you were very direct and spoke in good a tone to attract your audience. Your hook really made me want to listen more. You did a great job with incorporating the feedback that you received. I thought that the angel of the camera was good. Overall, great job on this assignment.